the main lead melody is awesome :D. But you should try to get more drum samples like Vegeance Future house 1 ,2 ,3 ,4 and/or Electro shock 1 ,2 are very good samples for Electro music.
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I'l see what i can do, thank you for advice :D
How to improve
You already have the first thing: You can make good melody lines and you have timing.
Second you can add a beat or a backup instrument like pads, bass and that kind of things. also you can add automation clips and whooshes...
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I used automation clips for the sound at the beginning and at 0:48. Cutoff.
I have bass, but I'm really ridiculously bad with drums. What's a whoosh? xD
Thanks for the review! :D
Since I listened this song, I've been skippin' every day with this song stuck in my head.
(love the mario jump sound in the song)
Thanks a lot man! glad you LOVE IT :D
I thought I didn't like drum N bass songs but this is the best song ever heard : )
The beat and the piano in this song are great :) But the vocals are a bit strange and that pattern that repeats throughout the song begans to get a bit boring. You can add piano notes and not just chords or an extra vocal or something...
That's why i give you an 8/10 or 4/5
I didn't mean for the vocals to creep you out ;)
I'll try to put some more variety in, to keep the listener interested.
Thanks again for the review! I always enjoy that!
I Like the beat, the piano, melody, the bass, I Like everything in this song:D but i have one question, wich plugin is that melody?? I Like that sound very much and i need more plugins on my program because its always the same in my songs...:P
PS: my english is really bad because i come from holland : ( srry
thanks man! the lead is nexus 2:dance leads:"LD arppiate me" and i put it in a lowcut filter.
plug in is "nexus 2",i use it mainly becuase i have never learned how to make my own leads :(.
anyways your English is spot on :) so dont worry about that.need any thing else just PM me.
I Think you use nexus:D
It's a new music genre named 'Happy Dubstep'
its a great song but there's missing something in the lead.
But its a great song and i like the piano and the vocals : D
Thanks for the review iam goin to spend a bit more time on this song before my new one to sort out any issues
i like it
I like the melodie and the bass but i dont like the beat
9- / 10
4 / 5
ok then i know that i have to work on it
Its fantastic, i would i can rate higher that 5 of 10...
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